I like her pose and her expression. However, I think it might've looked better if you were to go at it all in pencil with the paint splotches being in color. The pencil lines overlapping her colored areas are kinda distracting, it's like crossing your eyes.
--
"If you don't have enough snow to make snow angels, just use 20 lbs. of coconut shavings!"
-- Pee Wee's Christmas Special
boobs always sell man, I should know, I have them. Haha, love the anatomy and the coloring, mostly around the chest area (aha, yea, I noticed the chest looked nice, reasons for that maybe? haha) the hands are a little off in porportion but this looks nice.
--
God sees everything but can he see why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
the body looks anatomicly* correct, very well done plus the muscle/bone detail *spelling? The paint spots are a nice touch, along with the gloves and overalls, giving it the theme it has. My constructive critisim would be to give the paint a more dry look to it as it is on skin/fur and the clothin, and should have some signs of is drying, being on the skin more then floating over it. But overall It is a nice pic.
--
"True, I may look delicious, but Im afraid Im a Yorkshireman. We all taste of salt and coal."
The 25 semi-finalists for our "Darksiders: Your Last Days" contest have been selected! The ultimate winners will be chosen by Joe Madureira, aka "Joe Mad" of Vigil Games. Check out the awesome semi-finalists to see who made the cut!
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
Although `DEVlANT joined our community only a year ago, he's made sure to make his mark in as many ways as possible. From extensive bug testing around the site, to heading up the now infamous #devBUG Group, Martin's always eager to get involved. His inquisitive mind and enthusiastic personality is reflected in every part of the community which he reaches out to. Always eager to bring suggestions and feedback to us in a positive way, `DEVlANT shows a maturity way beyond his years. It's with great pleasure that we award very first Deviousness of 2010 t... Read More
Comments
I like her pose and her expression. However, I think it might've looked better if you were to go at it all in pencil with the paint splotches being in color. The pencil lines overlapping her colored areas are kinda distracting, it's like crossing your eyes.
--
"If you don't have enough snow to make snow angels, just use 20 lbs. of coconut shavings!"
-- Pee Wee's Christmas Special
--
Visit my gallery, and bring your comments with you.
--
God sees everything but can he see why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
the body looks anatomicly* correct, very well done plus the muscle/bone detail *spelling? The paint spots are a nice touch, along with the gloves and overalls, giving it the theme it has. My constructive critisim would be to give the paint a more dry look to it as it is on skin/fur and the clothin, and should have some signs of is drying, being on the skin more then floating over it. But overall It is a nice pic.
--
"True, I may look delicious, but Im afraid
Im a Yorkshireman. We all taste of salt and coal."
--
Check my comic "The Eye of Ramalach"! [link]
--
Check my comic "The Eye of Ramalach"! [link]
Hands and feet, i still have trouble with them.
--
Check my comic "The Eye of Ramalach"! [link]
--
Check my comic "The Eye of Ramalach"! [link]
Previous Page12Next Page