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Mecha Soldier WIP by =avencri:iconavencri:

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I will scrap this one later! For now i will post this WIP here hoping to get some critique.

This is a rather improvised image, my supervisor needed an image for a virtual magazine we are working on and asked me for any kind of image made by pencil. And just by doodling and improvising y ended up having this and i liked it so far.

It is heavily influenced by the Ballista girl from Masamune Shirow and a bit of Doc Oct! XD

Doing quite nice for an improvised thing at my job.

EDIT: Updated the image file!

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Mood: Joy ~otakumota Apr 23, 2009, 8:55:23 PM
Se ve que te va a quedar muy bien. :+fav:
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*Kerivan Apr 23, 2009, 10:11:44 PM
una de dos, H. o la cara está muy adelantada o los hombros muy atrasados, siento la postura muy forzada...

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El único sitio en el que encontrarás el éxito antes que el trabajo será en un diccionario.
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=p-sanchez Apr 24, 2009, 8:37:51 AM
You know, Masamune Shirow is my god! But he would be sad to see that his ridiculously detailed backgrounds have not made an impression on you. That would be my only complaint, critique wise. The character looks fine, but if you are seriously going to publish this i think you should really sketch out the background details some more. Can't wait to see a finished version! :D
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~kigasiller Apr 24, 2009, 12:56:41 PM
XD sisi, cuando vi esos brazos roboticos ahi atras lo primero que pense fue en El Dr. Octopus jajaja
Muy bueno eh! =D

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=avencri Apr 24, 2009, 3:47:40 PM
Podrías elaborar un poco mas?

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=avencri Apr 24, 2009, 3:48:40 PM
Haha, it is a WIP! XD

I updated the file right now. You know? What if we make this our collab? I think it would be awesome! =3

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Check my comic "The Eye of Ramalach"! [link]
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*Kerivan Apr 24, 2009, 6:37:35 PM
la espalda está demasiado arqueado para permitir que el rostro se vea de frente, la cara, me parece, deberìa estar un poco levantada.

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El único sitio en el que encontrarás el éxito antes que el trabajo será en un diccionario.
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=p-sanchez Apr 24, 2009, 7:18:47 PM
WOW, that's an idea! A colab inspired by Shirow, i'm diggin that! Sounds good to me.
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*necro-loup Apr 25, 2009, 8:49:48 AM
concuerdo con Kerivan, me parece que la espalda esta mal acomodada

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